There are thousands of ways to make people happy with a large amount of money. While money can not buy every happiness in that there are lots of joys that either for free or wealth can not afford.
To begin with, after being rich, people will not worry about the food, living places or transportations. All of these can be handled with money. Moreover, one can buy whatever he/she wants. As it shows on TV or Tic Tok, a majority of preople would like to live such life with luxurious cars and houses, having parties every day. Besides, they can do whatever they like instead of going to work daily.
From material to spiritual demands, people's desire could be highly met with plethora of money. In this case, most people are working hard to archive this aim.
However, we should make clear of that money can not buy everything. Or in another word, there are happniess for free or can not be purchased. First, the good health can make people happy. Quite often, people would not notice this happniess with their healthy conditions. But if recovered from severe disease, a healthy body would be their prior joy. Healthy body is the treasure of our own. Secondly, a good job which people can perform their skills completely can make people happy. Individual can be fufilled with the success at work, where their value realized. Dr. LongPing Yuan for instance, he devoted his life to researching mix-raced rice which prevent billions of people in the world from starvation. He lived a happy life since his work helped people and was written in the history.
In all, chasing for lots of money is the final goal for most people, while we should know there are still lots of happiness can make happy for free or unaffordable totally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, still, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72697368421 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29375875084 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7019812115 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.85 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400579472275 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118596813941 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902768636974 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234465987866 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906772440639 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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