You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You are studying for a qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it Write a letter to your manager In your letter Ask for some time off to complete a qualification Suggest what you will

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.

Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.

Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You should write at least 150 words.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...rtment in you ABC company. I am writing in regards to inquiry some time off to finish my Busi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61256544503 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73577118143 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9664138695 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346498709455 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117496212826 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446236676109 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171449429546 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221776652554 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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