You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Mohsen,
I hope this letter finds you well...!!!
I am writing this letter to share some good news about my travel to overseas. Yes, you understood correctly...!! I am going to Canada for pursuing Master's in Artificial Intelligence which is a 2-year course. I am through with all admission and visa processes. So, I will take off on January 10th.
Although there is ample of time to travel, I would rather start looking for a part-time job as It is a full-time course and I would no longer be employed and therefore will have no income. As I am a software engineer, I have the technical skills that would help me to look job with a similar profile.
One of your colleagues Mr. Sharma is onshore like me and I need a favor to ask him to refer me. Please find attached is my resume. Also, if you could send the mail id to your friend would be really helpful.
Also, I would be out there for a long time so let us catch up soon and cherish our moments. Write back to me your date, place and time. I am awaiting your response.
Love and Warm regards,
Mahesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50095481766 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7741233714 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3846153846 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29484037144 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820367274044 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736344640838 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137532534817 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794285037844 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.