You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that every individual has their own hobbies. While many people keep hobby as a pass time, few of them dedicate their time seriously. In this essay I will give reason to the former statement, and outweigh the advantages and disadvantges of keeping habits to the society.
To start with, people devote time to hobbies. It can be said as the personal interest in activities. I believe the person having hobby can never be bored out of life. Although people can be lethargic some times, but the ones who finds interest in a kind to activity. For instance, studying can be boring some times, but dancing can never go out of interest. In fact the recent survey says, 70% of workaholic people tends to have hobbies unknowingly. Moreover, it works as a therapy for majority of population. It can also help few to get out of boredom.
However, having such enthusiastic habit can have good effects. Not only as the individual, but also to the society in general.If a person can dedicate their time passionately they can turn their hobby to a profession. For example, a social media enthusiasts Mr Adesh is now an entertainer for full-time. Like wise, many have followed their passion and worked hard to convert their hobby. Some people who has writing as their hobby can write a script to the movie which be entertaining for the audience. Additonally, the many who have interest in sports and their passion could bring a medal to the country some day.
To conclude, despite of having hobbies as a pass time, an individual can also be a professional in many field if they dedicate their time in extra curricular activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...ual, but also to the society in general.If a person can dedicate their time passio...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ual, but also to the society in general.If a person can dedicate their time passio...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...ndividual can also be a professional in many field if they dedicate their time in extra cu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in fact, in general, no doubt, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78169014085 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69562894215 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.242370683 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4444444444 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133975008726 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048532848582 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393939401503 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940636274592 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374028822179 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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