You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Mark Miller, and I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my laptop yesterday on the Cairo to Alexandria train which sat off at 9:00 pm and reached Cairo station at 10:30.
As for my notepad bag, it is a black leather back and has a Dell badge. If you open its zip, you can find a brand new, expensive Dell laptop which costs approximately 2000 dollars along with its charger and some other precious accessories. Hopefully, Lost and Found department at Cairo Railway Station has observed and collected this invaluable item for me.
Regarding the details of the journey, my seat number was 34-A in the first class and the bag was kept at the overhead compartment corresponded to that seat. Unfortunately, I was so exhausted and I forgot to pick my belongings up while leaving the train in Rahmsise, Cairo at 9:00 pm.
Therefore, I would like an immediate physical check for yesterday's lost items, and it would be highly appreciated if you let me know as fast as it is possible that the item is found. In this case, I will manage the fastest transport to get it back. Because it is too late at night now, I assume you might not be able to check the item physically, but could you please go through the lost items register and confirm the availability of my computer until there is a chance for a real confirmation in the morning.
Sorry for any inconvenience and I am looking forward to hearing good news from your end.
Faithfully yours,
Mark Miller
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-18 | Nourhanm | 70 | view |
| 2019-06-07 | Abdelfatah | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59040590406 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64752368838 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2376138429 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.090909091 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237792089263 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737256563479 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735774256659 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11446782425 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872211615339 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.