You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Frank,

I have received your written complaint from the Residents Welfare office today. I understood that you are very upset about the noise coming from my flat.

To describe my problem, there are rats in the kitchen area and they are getting into my apartment through a broken pipe which goes into the central heating radiator. I was trying to catch them with a net attached to a stick. I was also trying to blockade the pipe with wood and hammering was required to push the small blocks to cover the gap so that rats and mice will not creep into my home again. Hence, I sincerely request you to accept my apologies for the disturbance caused.

Since, the actions which I have taken is temporary, I am planning to call the local plumbing company requesting assistance immediately. Once they arrive, I will completely replace the old piping system at any cost.

Thank you for your patience.

Best Regards,

John

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80745341615 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44213934841 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8599037304 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172658744279 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765899331709 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968781005776 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155613599568 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128129334445 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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