You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
This is in regards to the Crisis Management seminar advertised in the news and I am writing to you for more information related to this.
As you can understand, attending an overseas meeting from India needs diligent preparation and hence would like to know about the following:
On what date is this program being held on?
How may sessions are going to be conducted during this gathering?
Do the guests get full boarding i.e., breakfast, lunch and dinner or just only half boarding?
Do the oversees participants like myself get to stay in a hotel or shared accommodations?
I also understand that expenses will be incurring during the trip and would be grateful if you can send me printed catalogues related to prices and charges of bus fares, food (Incase of no free food), budget shopping centers close by to purchase basic items like soap, brush etc. Please also mention about about any other costs that is mandatory like visa fee.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Yash Ganesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/ Madam, This is in regards to the Crisis Management seminar advertise...
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Line 15, column 176, Rule ID: INCASE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: In case of
...o prices and charges of bus fares, food Incase of no free food, budget shopping centers c...
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Line 15, column 299, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: about
...ke soap, brush etc. Please also mention about about any other costs that is mandatory like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01149425287 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57720015305 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.741379310345 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4006657588 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273667998324 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908396431964 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829599707573 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109220104111 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877716162811 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.