You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily.
Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter:
• describe the problems
• explain how these problems are affecting you and others
• suggest what could be done about it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the poor quality of service provided by the public transport of your organisation from which we commute daily to office.
For the past one week the buses are making reoccurring delays in arriving at the bus stops because of which we reach after the scheduled office hours. Moreover, the planned busses are some times cancelled automatically as a result people including me have to look for other options of transportation such as either we have to book a taxi or to wait for other buses at the bus stops.
People including me have to suffer in myriad of ways because of this discontinuation in the service, as by reaching office late several individuals have received warning letters from their managers, some have also been relieved from their services. This is affecting not only our professional life but also the career.
I would like to suggest you to surge the number of public transports to accommodate a dramatic number of passengers. Furthermore, please follow the timetable stringently so that no one is late for their work.
I hope you will take my suggestions into considerations and will undertake necessary actions. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10849056604 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95963033373 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0253427621 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188192888066 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065896721797 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530731394544 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996077311254 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420442771582 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.