Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of your students who took an evening language course in the evening. I am writing to let you know that, unfortunately, I am engaged with too much housework and a project to do so that I won't be able to take the course at a particular duration. Would you kindly consider my situation favorably?
Let me put a finer point on why i can not attend evening courses. Once, I have seen your advertisement, i decided to take a course at night because of my work. It was not expected that i would be extremely busy at the moment i have registered. After all, all the works came out of nowhere and i am suffering handling all those work that even i can not even find for myself to get relax. Therefore this class won't be suitable for me to attend, instead, it would be better for me to arrange a different time.
Would you please postpone my schedule for next semester? If you could set the time up for next semester, i would greatly appreciate it.
Yours sincerely
Erman Duran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bly? Let me put a finer point on why i can not attend evening courses. Once, I...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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.... Once, I have seen your advertisement, i decided to take a course at night becau...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...se of my work. It was not expected that i would be extremely busy at the moment i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., all the works came out of nowhere and i am suffering handling all those work th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ering handling all those work that even i can not even find for myself to get rel...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ould set the time up for next semester, i would greatly appreciate it. Yours s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reatly appreciate it. Yours sincerely Erman Duran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, after all, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39893617021 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59711225746 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2570254636 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226236729034 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853513732069 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503067189263 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151414291635 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557415539571 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.