You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.Write a letter to the admissions

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.

Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

You do NOT need to write your own address.

Begin your letter as- Dear Sir or Madam,

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to thank you for the invitation for the interview and to request you to reschedule the appointment. Unfortunately, I will not be able to attend due to another prescheduled meeting at the same time. Please accept my sincere apologies for the same.

Let me explain in bit more detail. Since I'm currently looking for a part time job to fund my studies, I have applied for some openings. One of the employers wants to meet me around 10 AM this Thursday to evaluate my skills and I have already confirmed my availability. Due to this prior commitment, I will not be able to meet you at the same time.

Would you kindly reschedule my appointment to a different date or to a later time on the Thursday? This will be a great help as I'm looking forward to attending the course in your college. Also, could you please share some details about the interview, such as the duration of the discussion and whether any written evaluation is required?

Thanking you for considering.

Yours Sincerely
Siddhartha

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...et me explain in bit more detail. Since Im currently looking for a part time job t...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...etail. Since Im currently looking for a part time job to fund my studies, I have applied ...
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Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Thursday? This will be a great help as Im looking forward to attending the course...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75824175824 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86037433487 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3883921718 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26708401866 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977936732856 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718063716642 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190273314611 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328039386848 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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