You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shoping centre has cheap second-hand furniture.
Write to the shop owner describing what you need and asking whether they have these items and what they cost.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the inexpensive home furniture for my personal use. One of my friends told me about your shop and thereupon I found your address from internet.
I recently shifted in flat which is unfurnished so I require almost all items for flat and I have very limited budget to furnish the flat with necessary furniture. The top most items in priority lists are bed not necessary double bed but it should be wooden and dining table of 4 chairs as there is limited space in the dining area. Another item which I would like to buy is shoe stand, though I have no choice of material, it should not be wider than 5 feet in height.
I know that you mostly deal in used furniture and availability of items depend on the seller too, thereby, I would like to get information about the availability of these items. In addition to status, it would be mandatory to mention the tentative cost of the items and any extra expenditure such as transportation, assembling etc. I do not mind to pay extra if items match my specification and are in robust conditions.
I am planning to buy these items in next week so I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
RAJA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this lette...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of the items and any extra expenditure such as transportation, assembling etc. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6592633527 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8481188273 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148338974676 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488368410297 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371624572385 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817262089349 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217155898286 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.