You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing this letter to inquire about the upcoming seminar that our organization is planning to arrange.
I have been with this organization for 3 years however now I am working in the transcription department. My career path is managerial, I always take a lead in training our team, arranging workshops, developing/training new hires. My manager suggested me to take part in this seminar. We believe this will give exposure to me and I will be to gain some new skills by the end which then I will be able to share and use on our new hires that I train.
I will like to gain some information on this seminar, itinerary and If you can share the planned daily program, most importantly if I can get to know about the overall cost and accommodation process as it will not be sponsored by our department. I will have to make arrangements for myself. I will be thankful to you if you can give me these details so I can make arrangements.
Your Sincerely,
Malik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...use on our new hires that I train. I will like to gain some information on this s...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l have to make arrangements for myself. I will be thankful to you if you can give...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63068181818 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03759480177 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4222183895 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173586644217 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721163316621 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594643527993 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129853786179 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047473730754 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.