You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Muhamad Abdul. I am taking a part-time evening course. I am having a hard time keeping up with this course. I am afraid I cannot continue the course.
My problem is, I have a full-time job, from 9am – 5pm. Sometimes, I am asked to stay extra hours, to finish up the rest of the work. That is because the holidays are coming up soon. Also I have to do some work preparations for the next day.
At night when I get home, I am too tired to even prepare a dinner for myself. Also I have no time to study for this course.
I would like drop this course this quarter. Then take it again the next quarter. So, please accept my situation.
Thank you for your cooperation
Sincerely
M. Abdul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hard time keeping up with this course. I am afraid I cannot continue the course....
^
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ecause the holidays are coming up soon. Also I have to do some work preparations for...
^^^^
Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ed to even prepare a dinner for myself. Also I have no time to study for this course...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 593.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26618705036 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30635857833 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669064748201 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.1376154144 44.8134815571 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.3571428571 76.5299724578 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.92857142857 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270039775993 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911482328836 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890526440099 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147411244069 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778088718908 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.6 8.37731958763 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.01 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.24 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.