Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to your neighbours.In your letter-describe the situation-explain why you cannot continue at this time-say what actio

Essay topics:

Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your neighbours.
In your letter
-describe the situation
-explain why you cannot continue at this time
-say what action you would like to take

Dear neighbors,

By this letter i would like to inform about my new situation. fortunately, I got a full-time job as you know it is very important for me at the hardest moment in my life, I really need to pay the bills and save money to help my mother overseas. unfortunately, I will not be able to continue doing the course with you and I hope you friends understand the new scenario. The topics and the companies are definitely enjoyable for me and my afternoons goes so quick when we are together.
I wish I could spend more time in the future with you guys and your family I really appreciate.
Thank you for your help a long of this period and for all I have learned.

Best Regards,
Fernanda

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear neighbors, By this letter i would like to inform about my new situa...
^
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Fortunately
... like to inform about my new situation. fortunately, I got a full-time job as you know it i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... save money to help my mother overseas. unfortunately, I will not be able to continue doing t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 578.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41221374046 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63125242179 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679389312977 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5407420194 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5714285714 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252863526134 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989440338303 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727508196769 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17269908445 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122623217487 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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