You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one Of his objects. Write a letter and explain
-how are you enjoyed staying with your friend.
-Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how much stake happened
-mention how are you plan to return on the object
Dear Jay,
Hi, how are you? I hope that you and your family are in pink of health? I am writing this letter in connection with a leather bag that I mistakenly carried with myself after staying with you on this weekend.
Firstly, Thanks a lot for the amazing weekend. What a relaxing time it was! I completely enjoy the time i spend with you and your family. I was really impressed with the hospitality your family provided me during my one week stay. Actually that one week brough back lots of memories our school days.
during the time of unpacking, I came to know that I had accidentally picked your brown leather bag with my stuffs. I thought it was mine as I usually carry leather bag for travelling but later I came to know it has your name all over it. I am really sorry about it. I know this might have caused inconvenience to you.
Last but not least, my fiancé is planning to come to Delhi next weekend, so I will hand over your bag to her and she will give it to you by this saturday evening. Your birthday is around the corner so you might as well as get a surprise gift alone with bag. Keep waiting happily.
Thank you again for being such a kind host and I hope to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Milan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-09 | Milan Desai | 82 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ime it was! I completely enjoy the time i spend with you and your family. I was r...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
... lots of memories our school days. during the time of unpacking, I came to know t...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 267, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll over it. I am really sorry about it. I know this might have caused inconvenien...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35622317597 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26533021319 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7178019555 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4375 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328547397616 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102143128131 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856339182092 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196290120738 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106732314135 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.