You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in.
Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left some important documents when I was staying at you place in Australia. I humble request you to please return the file by post.
I visited to Australia for attending two days business seminar on Customer Marketing and Advertising” as it would ai me in enhancing my knowledge and skills. I was really grateful that you allowed me to stay in your house. I had a lot of fun with you and your family and you were a great host.
When I arrive to my office on 29th September, I realized that I had left some critical documents in the room I stayed, perhaps in the drawer on the left side of the bed. They were placed in a blue file with the name Prabhpreet Kaur printed on the top of the file. Those official papers are very critical as they contain confidential and sensitive financial data, hard copy of the presentation and some notes that I registered during the conference. Unquestionably, they are as much as important to the company as they are to me and If they are misplaced the company will suffer huge losses and it will also impact my career.
I would request you to kindly return the file through post as soon as possible and please do share the delivery number so that I can keep a track of the package.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Take care an see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou to please return the file by post. I visited to Australia for attending two ...
^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e in enhancing my knowledge and skills. I was really grateful that you allowed me...
^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t you allowed me to stay in your house. I had a lot of fun with you and your fami...
^
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e to hearing from you soon. Take care an see you soon. With love, Prabhpreet...
^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47191011236 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57083300553 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8269355911 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448014218612 0.216113520407 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153978118994 0.0766984524023 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108545665842 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224711492523 0.12726935374 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136522312911 0.0580467560999 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.