Present a written argument or case study to an educational reader with no specialised knowledge of the following topic:
The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources.
To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?
In today’s world people are using natural resources available at an increasing rate indiscriminately to meet their never-ending demands. As a result, they are not only getting exhausted but also harm the environment. However, it is believed that government should discourage people for the overused these resources. In my opinion, I do believe that the political party in power should lay down certain laws and regulations which prevent people from excessively using the resources.
With the utilisation of natural deposits haphazardly causes environment pollution thus affecting the health of people. Moreover, with the increase in the population of the nations the demand for the natural resources has also increase. People are using these resources for their incessant needs, as a result it causes the destruction to the environment and their exhaustion. If these resources are not available to it will make the human life impossible. To illustrate, the overuse of petroleum in vehicles and for burning causes air pollution as a result leads to heath issues such as asthma, tuberculosis and cardio vascular problems.
The government of the country should take the responsibility to ensure that the resources are used efficiently and effectively so that they are not worn-out. They should create awareness among people through campaigning and presentations motivation them to utilise these resources in efficacious manner as if they use them carelessly if will affect the environment. Furthermore, they should encourage people to take part in non-voluntary activities to protect their environment and natural resources such as planting more trees, using recyclable material and not wasting water.
In my opinion, I vehemently agree that government should take necessary action and steps to ensure that the natural resources of the country are not depleted and are used productively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...mand for the natural resources has also increase. People are using these resources for t...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o the environment and their exhaustion. If these resources are not available to it...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t depleted and are used productively.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62283737024 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11709207047 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519031141869 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0631846224 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205728935715 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734282578316 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350589104234 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118699777955 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321122368171 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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