You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:
• thank your friend for the stay
• describe where you left the envelope
• ask him/her to return it to you by post
Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________
Dear John,
It was a pleasant experience to stay at your beautiful home and enjoy your hospitality during the stay. I’ve forgotten my documents in the room at your house and I want you to ship it to me on urgent basis.
First of all, I must admit that I made the best decision by accepting your invitation to stay at your home instead of hotel. You have left no stone unturned in serving me and making me feel comfortable. Beside the stay, you helped me a lot with my movements locally, and I am so delighted as well as grateful for treating me with this much attention.
Unfortunately, I have left a large envelope in the room where I stayed. When I left the room, probably I forgot it in the chest drawer. If you don’t find it there, then check the cupboard please. I might have placed it there.
As soon as you get it, ship it back to me since it contains very important documents related to my current project. You may get angry, but I will pay for the cost of shipment of the envelope. Just send me details of your bank account and the incurred cost please.
Regards,
Jimmy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46568627451 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52078537373 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0409037839 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370320501621 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114325394261 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783299549404 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223084545024 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884733574113 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.