You study at a university and often use the university library. The library closes very early in the evening and your are not able to stay there and study. Write a letter to the manager of the library. In the letter:
1.Describe who you are and the details of your university course
2.Explain the problem at the library
3.Suggest what you think the manager should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Himanshu Malhotra and I am a full-time student studying an M.Tech course.This is my last year and I often use university library.I am writing this letter to raise a concern about the university closing time.I visit it more often now a days because my final exams are nearby.
As a last year student,we have to write thesis and give a presentation after our theory examinations.To prepare thesis,I refer few books which are available only in this library.So I prefer to visit and seat for long hours to finish my thesis.
But,unfortunately timing are up to 6:00pm only and I have so much to research and write.It is causing little delay in completing the same.Also,I had raised an issue about timing to the librarian,but there was no feedback.
Hence,I request you to please make sure that timing of the library is rescheduled till midnight.If require,I can take few of my friends with me who will work as a librarian for an overnight shift.
Hope you will consider this request.
Yours sincerely,
Himanshu Malhotra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91061452514 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91168125082 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687150837989 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.436972492 44.8134815571 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.5 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160117348544 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677821986553 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528486003738 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073749952856 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582423497972 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 8.37731958763 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.