You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.
In your letter
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your could put in the reference.
Dear Ms Naina,
I am Leena Sawant, last year M Tech student, Process Engineering 2018 batch.I am writing this letter to request a letter of reference for a new job.
There was a campus recruitment drive and you will be glad to know that my selection has been done.The company name is "Punj Lloyd" and I will be posted at Calcutta office which is my hometown.I would be joining next month as a Project Controller.
Working with an MNC in the very first go I never expected.It was always my dream to begin my career with a big shot and this has become true finally. This would not only help me in gaining an experience but also give me an opportunity to work with different clients and interaction with few international delegates as well.This in result is going to be a turning point in my career.Hence,this job means a lot to me.
It would be great if you can give me the details of my education, such as my bachelor study details,master study scores and my behavioural note.
I am sure you will help in this regards.
Yours sincerely,
Leena Sawant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms Naina, I am Leena Sawant, last year M Tech stud...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...student, Process Engineering 2018 batch.I am writing this letter to request a let...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...to know that my selection has been done.The company name is 'Punj Lloyd' ...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...at Calcutta office which is my hometown.I would be joining next month as a Projec...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...C in the very first go I never expected.It was always my dream to begin my career ...
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Suggestion: This
...ith few international delegates as well.This in result is going to be a turning poin...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...oing to be a turning point in my career.Hence,this job means a lot to me. It would ...
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Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...to be a turning point in my career.Hence,this job means a lot to me. It would be gr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , master
...ation, such as my bachelor study details,master study scores and my behavioural note. ...
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Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ural note. I am sure you will help in this regards. Yours sincerely, Leena Saw...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help in this regards. Yours sincerely, Leena Sawant
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rds. Yours sincerely, Leena Sawant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61780104712 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89042223902 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3430054042 44.8134815571 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139575253473 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702585829468 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667878427189 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819169534196 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787434929551 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.