Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the dish which was served in your restaurant on last Saturday.My name is Arshdeepsingh ,I visited in your restaurant with my family on last Saturday when we were shopping in the mall ,near to your restaurant.Therefore, we decided to go in your restaurant for dinner as well as we heard a lot about your restaurant from the masses that the quality of the food in your restaurant is very sumptuous.
When we went there then we saw a special menu in the entrance of restaurant about the specific cuisines and we planned to give order for beef cubes with cold beverages which had been tried by us in varied restaurants before. When we got the food and we spend one hour to eat this food but it was sour in taste.Having eaten the food.Unfortunately,some of my fiends promptly started vomiting and they had to suffer from several gastric problems.
My intention is to write this letter to you that you should suddenly take appropriate actions to instruct your chefs to follow a proper hygienic manner.I hope you will consider about this inconvenience.
Your sincerely Arshdeepsingh
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...ut this inconvenience. Your sincerely Arshdeepsingh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90306122449 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26109639101 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.075728612 44.8134815571 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.2 76.5299724578 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.2 16.8248392259 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.2 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192522141555 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948081301354 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823953317936 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115510024594 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798181163575 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 8.37731958763 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.