You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to my last visit at your restaurant.
Two days ago my family and I visited your restaurant to celebrate my birhtday. As I have been to your place many times and know your menu very well. I decided that your restaurant will be the best for the event.
Firstly, I would like to thank to John for his great sens fo humor and extremely high level of customer service. He makes our visit unforgettable.
Secondly, I want to express my dissatisfaction about a dish that we have ordered that day.
We ordered fisherman's basket with chips and jug of coke, but we shocked to discover that the fish in our serving was undercooked. After complaining about it to the manager, we were told that the restaurant had run out of shripms- not a best excuse for such a good restaurant a such a bad product. You must understand my disappointment and frustration when my family and I had to leave the restaurant with empty stomach.
My intention in writing this letter is to help you to avoid the situation like that in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regards to my l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taurant will be the best for the event. Firstly, I would like to thank to John f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vice. He makes our visit unforgettable. Secondly, I want to express my dissatisf...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t a dish that we have ordered that day. We ordered fishermans basket with chips ...
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Suggestion: the
... restaurant had run out of shripms- not a best excuse for such a good restaurant ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in the future. Yours faithfully, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66834170854 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76892174011 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9822592604 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216819992045 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712678834427 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637543715075 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991861711174 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854951202294 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.