You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of your restaurant -Explain why you were there -describe the problem -write about the action you want the m

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of your restaurant

-Explain why you were there

-describe the problem

-write about the action you want the manager to take.

Dear sir,

I am writing to complain about the food quality in a recent dinner at your restaurant.

I had been to your restaurant to celebrate my son's birthday on 25th December 2019. I had seen the customer ratings on your website, so I choose this place in hope to enjoy the best cuisine.

However, this event could not meet my expectations as after waiting for a half an hour, I was told that 'curry', an Indian dish, that I ordered could not be cooked because some of the active ingredients were not available in the kitchen. On top of that, I found hair strand in my beverage that inculcates a sense of dissatisfaction as it was not the dinner for which I had to pay $175 for bad quality.

Although I tried to meet you in person, your assistant Mr Smith told me about your absence. Therefore, for the inconvenience, please arrange a refund of my bill that I paid on that day. For reference, I have attached the copy of the receipt along with this letter.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Dheeraj Goyal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to complain about the food ...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my sons birthday on 25th December 2019. I had seen the customer ratings on your w...
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Line 13, column 171, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t I ordered could not be cooked because some of the active ingredients were not available i...
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Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you. Yours faithfully, Dheeraj Goyal
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, therefore, as to, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59473684211 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65882735071 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4148896958 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199218824032 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775757034164 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669783464017 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114287384585 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605815669604 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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