You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged.
Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter
• Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled.
• Describe your suitcase and what happened to it.
• Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the damaged luggage that delivered when I used your travel service.
My name is Sandip and on my recent trip to Pune from Rajkot, I travelled from one of your buses, the one which departs daily from Rajkot at 7 pm. On driver’s insistence, I kept my bag, which used to be a brand new bag from the Wilcard, in the luggage cabin. When the bag was handed back at destination, it was completely ruined from the edges. Even the handle was broken, so it can not be pull on wheels, anymore. I believe it was handled very irresponsibly, even after guaranteed the safety of the baggage.
I would really appreciate if you could provide full compensation for the bag as it is torn in the way that can not be used again. Besides, company has explicitly mentioned on the ticket about the full responsibility of luggage.
I look forward to hearing from you immediately.
Yours Sincerely,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tely. Yours Sincerely, Sandip Ramani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69822485207 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74935974862 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7023053989 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142356564992 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572511954021 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439322851156 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841022457476 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440871622569 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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