you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.How important the licence is to youAsking how he/she found itSaying how you would love to thank him/her.

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you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
How important the licence is to you
Asking how he/she found it
Saying how you would love to thank him/her.

Hi Dave,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for returning my lost driving license.

As I live far from my workplace, I have to drive everyday. Thus, having a driving license with me is quite crucial. Without it, I have to take bus which is quite exhaustive and time consuming. To be honest, it is frustrating to wait for bus and getting late for work due to irregularities of buses. I was going to get new license but then I heard from you that you found it.

I remember that last time I saw it when i drove to mega mall in downtown. When i realized that I missed it, I tried to check at the mall. But I had no luck, If you could tell me where exactly you found it so that i will be extra cautious next time.

Nevertheless, I really appreciate that you went an extra mile to return it. And, as token of appreciation, I would like to invite you for dinner at my home. Please let me know about your availability so I can make arrangements accordingly. You can follow the address on the license to my place.

Again, thank you very much and I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Sandip Ramani

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... far from my workplace, I have to drive everyday. Thus, having a driving license with me...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I remember that last time I saw it when i drove to mega mall in downtown. When i ...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i drove to mega mall in downtown. When i realized that I missed it, I tried to c...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l me where exactly you found it so that i will be extra cautious next time. N...
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Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Yours sincerely, Sandip Ramani
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30841121495 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58613515311 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630841121495 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.2051698555 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4666666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186440456073 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608174000295 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570204830106 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110403922335 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362883841635 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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