You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged.
Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter
• Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled.
• Describe your suitcase and what happened to it.
• Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase.
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen and I currently have a gold membership of your travelling service. Lately, I have decided to have a business trip from Ho Chi Minh City to Da Nang and I chose to travel by bus which was your company’s. However, I had faced some problems with my suitcase by the time I arrived and thus, I am writing this letter to require your attention to this matter and demand a compensation.
I have paid for a round-trip ticket for the departure on March 1st and return on March 10th using my gold membership card. On registration, I checked on ‘Fragile luggage’ and the staffs assured that my suitcase in which contained my laptop and other high-technology gadgets would be delivered carefully. I didn’t check again until I arrived at the hotel, the suitcase had a crack at the bottom and everything inside was broken, and I was sure to stick to it all the way to my accommodation. All the important information saved in laptop was lost. Now I cannot work or have a meeting with my colleagues. I am very disappointed with your bus service this time.
Therefore, I am demanding a payment from your company for the replacement of my belongings including compensation for my broken suitcase. If we cannot go to an agreement, I will have to open a lawsuit upon this situation.
I am looking forward to receiving your answer.
Yours sincerely,
Truong N.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the staffs assured that my suitcase in which contained my laptop and other high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76734693878 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08533093397 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587755102041 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1355510908 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191791468811 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763744163843 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575757182876 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117309782854 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601881882846 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.