Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I has been implied that only certain jobs are suitable for each gender because of the difference of qualities between the two opposite sexes. In my opinion, while this idea might be true in the past, it is not correct to apply in the modern world.
In the past, the difference between men and women were extremely huge that only a few unprofessional jobs were available for the weaker sex while men were getting all the perfect careers. For example, the most popular occupations for women in the 19th century was cooking and sewing because most people agreed that women did not meet the required strength for outdoor jobs. As can be seen, the biggest difference that separated jobs for each gender was the strength and stamina between sexes. Moreover, while men tended to have faster speed of making reliable decisions than women, they usually took bigger jobs such as sheriffs, hunters and doctors while women stayed indoor and took housing as an occupation.
However, the aforementioned statement is not truly correct in the modern world. Firstly, equal education is being provided to both genders widely, which means the skills and abilities of both genders are becoming balanced. With almost identical qualities, the line between men and women is fading and occupations are now available to the two genders equally. Secondly, scientists have stated that women’s body and brain can operate as much and strongly as men’s because there are no differences in humans’ structure. Theoretically, women have the same qualities as men to compete in any majors.
In conclusion, saying that men and women fit in different majors due to the difference of qualities is not exactly correct these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
I has been implied that only certain jobs are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10676156584 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64026242568 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4728827067 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318271963522 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109259192579 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069080372795 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176418002089 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650696263377 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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