You travelled by plane last week and your suitcace was lost. You have still heard nothing from airline company. Write to the airline and explaine what happened. Describe them your suitcase and tell what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about

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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcace was lost. You have still heard nothing from airline company. Write to the airline and explaine what happened. Describe them your suitcase and tell what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to complain about the suitcase that I lost last week at Bangalore airport when I was traveling through Indigo flight from Mumbai to Bangalore on 23 July 2019. The flight PNR number is 67687678.

I was carrying a blue color VIP suitcase, a model number RF233 that was having significant confidential business documents of mine as well as other cardinal items like a Canon camera and the office garments. <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">On Tuesday evening, I boarded indigo flight </span>6E70<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> from </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Mumbai</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> and handed over the suitcase to airlines authority. </span>After reaching the destination, Indigo airlines announced to collect all luggage from belt no.9. To my amazement, I did not receive it. Then, I complained about the incident to airport authorities, and they assured me to handover the missing suitcase within two days.
It's been more than a week, no one from the airline has contacted and tried to update me the missing suitcase status. Had I not missed the suitcase due to airline fault, I would have attended the meeting with the clients without postponing it. Hoping you understand the severity of the situation and will help me to get the suitcase back within two days. Again, If no action takes place on it, I would have to escalate it to higher authorities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... blue color VIP suitcase, a model number RF233 that was having significant confid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5625 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.18222329738 2.54303337028 164% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0729203002 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161406946021 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710921657899 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442899488237 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123052305642 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353143859048 0.0580467560999 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 8.71597938144 175% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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