Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although there is no doubt that crime must be punished, it is essential to consider which type of penal system is most appropriate. While some believe that a system of the fixed sentence should be adopted, I support the view that punishments should be based on circumstances and motives.
Those who advocate implementing a judicial process of set punishments may argue that this would make criminal trials more efficient. For instance, if a jury has decided a particular defendant is guilty of murder, the judge needs to refer only "punishment of murder" to sentence that person to life imprisonment. The benefit of this is that a tremendous amount of time would be saved in court, thus leading to significant financial savings. As a result, more money could be saved and can utilize in healthcare, education, and welfare.
However, I would argue that the above system is too rigid, and the process of " flexible punishments" is quite fairer. The latter method, which many countries use, leaves more room for compassion towards the offender who has been blackmailed or manipulated. For example, if a thief is able to prove that he had been bullied into committing the crime, he should be sentenced to less prison time than a thief who had been motivated by greed. If instead, fixed punishments were implemented, the sense of fairness and morality would be lost.
In conclusion, while a legal process of fixed punishment might be more cost-effective and efficient, a procedure to access the crimes on the basis of circumstances and motives is more just, and justice, in my view, is paramount.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16417910448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12265951561 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0345645325 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306280643459 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104479406316 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765951673914 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183540794877 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645035008099 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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