You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found department',you have not received your bag yet.
In Your Letter
(A)write the details of incident
(B)inquire the status of your lost bag to airline
(C)tell what you want if the bag is not found
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards my matter that is related with my lost bag.Actually , two weeks ago , I visited from New Delhi to Canada by aeroplane for a business meeting and owing to hurry,I was unable to pick my bag so I left it in aeroplane.
When I reached at my meeting destination then I realized my bag was not with means it was very important to me because I kept my some of my documents in it.Moreover , after my meeting , after my meeting , I wanted to get my bag back and then , I contacted 'Lost and Found department' of airport with full description of my bag and flight Number.Furthermore , currently , I am in India but , after a long wait , I have not received my bag and owing to that , I am in dilemma so I decide that I should write again so that you can solve my matter.
Beside it , as I told you ,it was very significant to me so I want it back and if you do not find it then I will have to face innumerable problems with my clients.Last but not the least , it is high time, kindly , give your best to find this bag so that I can complete my pending works which is related with bag's documents and I would like to tell you that it is a block colour zipper bag with an iron handle on the top side.
I would deeply appreciate you if you may solve this matter on prompt basis.
Thanking you in advance
Your faithfully,
Sandeep
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 32.9175257732 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24150943396 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58931240665 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524528301887 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 16.3608247423 324% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.149574941 44.8134815571 427% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.8 76.5299724578 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 16.8248392259 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 4.34317383033 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247238897668 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165683388976 0.0766984524023 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048608959157 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142581075291 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393615186574 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 8.37731958763 298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 7.45979381443 273% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.2 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 8.54432989691 272% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.