You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live.
Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter:
say how you came to know about him/her – advertisement in the our sector market
explain why you want to learn – French language IELTS – planning to migrate to Canada
Ask what help they can offer. – fee, duration of the course, timing
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to ask for information about the French course offered by you. I have read your advertisement about learning a foreign language and I would like to get more details about the course such as duration, cost, and suitable timing.
Firstly, I wonder if you could give me a small overview of the offered foreign language courses. Actually, I am living in a nearby society of yours and I am planning to migrate to Canada in the next couple of months. Therefore, I would like to learn the French language to communicate with the Quebec province community.
Furthermore, I would like to know about the fee structure of the course for the beginner level. Also, I would like to mention here that I am doing a full-time job in private bank, thus I am looking for flexible timing classes. I would really appreciate it if you could provide details information about module vise duration.
I look forward to receiving your prompt reply!
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91279069767 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71318590807 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9223057035 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 4.34317383033 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196196298416 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829982011696 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623627461128 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116009840293 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871801643446 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.