You want to sell some of your furniture . You think a friend of your might like buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain why you are selling
Describe the furniture
Suggest a date when your friend come and see the furniture
Dear, Xian Date:19 May 2020
I am writing with regarding express my furniture selling estimated that you have known unique items of furniture may sell which advertised on a renowned daily name ‘The National Observer’ but you wanted to desire for buying my valued furniture equipment.
You are my close friend of all dearest and nearest; you also informed about me I got an especial scholarship from the Boston University in London last year. However, I am waiting eagerly for the aim of such valuable fully funded scholarship so that my essential items of my furniture may shift to my nearest uncle house instead of my emergency polish wooden furniture which will you committed me to buy.
Polish wooden furniture made of extinguished natural forest furniture that is strictly harder since a long time you know better. It has tremendous natural protection power ability such as bookshelf, wear drove, pen stand, laptop table, and also a romantic, easy chair which will help me while I am outing from long-distance journey.
I am requested to you that please come within a month you don’t know for the payment of mine, provide me at your desire time, mention here that I will leave my country and station by 15 days.
With the regards to you and your family & and come to take valuable furniture as soon as possible.
Your loving friends
Azong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear, Xian ...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Dear, Xian Date:19 May 2020 I am writing with ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Date:19 May 2020 I am writing with regarding express my ...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...aluable furniture as soon as possible. Your loving friends Azong
^^^^
Line 10, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s soon as possible. Your loving friends Azong
^^^
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s possible. Your loving friends Azong
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93043478261 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5710641513 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.570399267 44.8134815571 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.75 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351957287554 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175560463636 0.0766984524023 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886687980386 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191515265161 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104676558372 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 8.37731958763 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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