Role of the political leader in 1947 base on separation of power under the British Empire. what extent do your opinion?
Mr. Gandhi name Mohan Lal Korom Chand Gandhi become a great world antiapartheid leader consequences of many Muslim political leader who involved in Khalifa movement following another magnificent leader in Turkey Khalifate. It imposed them on political perspective through intellectual get way towards Ghandhi philosophical context and that time an association of Hindu Muslim community accord with the theory of such a renowned philosopher. Mowlana Abul Kalam Azad was another scholar who led the famous daily name Azadi as a more spoke person of the west Pakistan even though he involved in a political association name Congress it gear up next to full-fledged a political party where Mohammad Ali Zinna was the most crucial prominent leader of that during the period. The great two political leaders expressed their political ideology base on the two nations theory but Kalam was the innovative think tank on two nations theory against partition of the Indian sub-continent in 1947 although Zinnah was the most favorable political partner under the two nations political theory, at the eleven hours he implemented such a historical dialectical theory as a political agenda of the Muslim League.
On another way, two political pioneer leaders were the same compartment passenger before the partition of Bengali. Despite real political opinion, it separated them aftermath of the British political diplomatic policy. Jinnah hold Islamic philosophical scholar secularism, Kalam hold liberal political secularism. Pakistan and India became two nation as a free state but were the two nations free from emancipation, totalitarianism and neo-colonialism?
To sum up, British sun risen by establishing of the east India company in 1857 after the conspiracy of the last Bengali ruler and through the torture, oppression around two hundred a year by formation of their new divided rules and principles formation where strategically existing their neo-colonialism conspiracy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...cularism. Pakistan and India became two nation as a free state but were the two nation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57333333333 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05840190659 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.857376952 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.777777778 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177374750658 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762207712392 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067233122167 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103254797106 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058316350564 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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