You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• Explain why you are selling the television.
• Describe the television.
• Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
________________________________________
Write at least 150 words
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear……..,
Dear Ahmed,
I am writing to you regarding my television. I am planning to sell it. It will be great if you are in need of a second hand television.
One of my best friends has bought a new television for me on my birthday. My wife checked if we can use any space for the new television. Unfortunately, there are no available spaces as we already has three old televisions in different rooms. For that reason, we decided to sell the television in our kids bedroom.
The kids television has many features that would be suitable for your little son. For example, he can install many of the most interesting games on it. Your son will be able to watch many cartoons on youtube. The big screen is a nice advantage. Imagine you have a cinema at home.
what about meeting on Thursday at 6:30 p.m. it will be a great opportunity to check the television yourself and of course your little son is welcome to attend with you. A delicious meal huge icecream cone is awaiting him with my kids. waiting for your confirmation. it would be a great time together while checking the television at the same time.
Best Regards,
Nourhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...elevision in our kids bedroom. The kids television has many features that would...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...Imagine you have a cinema at home. what about meeting on Thursday at 6:30 p.m. ...
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Line 17, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiting
...ream cone is awaiting him with my kids. waiting for your confirmation. it would be a gr...
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Line 17, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...my kids. waiting for your confirmation. it would be a great time together while ch...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second, so, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63235294118 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68675303452 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7026484436 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.5882352941 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217537036276 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688992857532 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618925602239 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138659025158 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631024659523 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.