Dear Sir/Madam,
I feel the need to share with you an amazing opportunity for advancing my career by taking a course which is related to my work profile and can be mutually beneficial to the company and me. Allow me to elaborate.
Firstly, the course that I intend to take is Issues of Insider Trading. This course has been specifically tailored for working-class people who are in the banking industry. Considering my working profile, I feel I am eligible for it. The course will deal with the nitty-gritty of Insider Trading.
Moreover, the course can help the organization as well. There have been advertisements on company Career portal to hire an insider trading instructor. As such, I feel that if allowed to take the course, it will help the company and give me something which I am interested in.
Furthermore, the course is only 3 months long. It will be 1-month in-person classes and 2 months of web-conference attendance. As a result, I will it will not impact my office work. Fortunately, the institute has reverted to my email stating they can enrol me till next week with no late fees.
I hope that you will accede to my request and give me this opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I feel the need to share with you an ama...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...ructor. As such, I feel that if allowed to take the course, it will help the company an...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this opportunity. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84688995215 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91498709955 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2957735631 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18871593323 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065172429519 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428828680182 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946584384742 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227864109661 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.