You went to a theatre yesterday with a friend. Your friend had an accident and a staff member helped. Write to manager:
How it happened
How staff member helped
What should be done in future.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to complain about poor waste management of your theatre. My friend suffered serious accident while we both were exiting the premise after enjoying the evening show, and I believe things would not have gone wrong, if you had taken measures earlier.
I, along with my friend Martha, am a regular visitor to your theatre that we pay a visit once in a week. Yesterday, she could not see a lying banana peel while exiting in low-lit theatre and stepped on it. As a result, she had sudden fall on the floor. Luckily the responsible staff for that zone came very fast and managed to provide first-aid to her. So far I can remember, his name is Luis. We were also complemented with home-drop service by your theatre. My friend’s injury could have gone really bad, if your authorities would not have taken actions fast.
However, nobody expect that wastages lie on a theatre floor. This not only a matter of health-hazard, but also a concern of hygiene. I would highly request you to take immediate steps to keep the theatre neat and clean. You can run an inspection after each show finishes to keep control over the cleaning staffs in this regard.
I look forward to seeking a audience friendly theatre soon.
Kind regards,
Tasnim Fahmi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'expects'.
Suggestion: expects
...taken actions fast. However, nobody expect that wastages lie on a theatre floor. T...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is regard. I look forward to seeking a audience friendly theatre soon. Kind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43286616086 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7321554586 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205094476459 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566220994208 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368601117832 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119045985649 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244200508164 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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