In our world today, there are a lot of criminals because of the kind of upbringing parents gave to their kids. Many criminals commit more crimes as soon as they are released from Correctional Centres. In this essay I will discuss how the wrong association will make a criminal commit more crimes after being released from prison, and how orientation of good values will help to solve this issue.
To begin with, when an individual keeps the wrong company, it will show in their actions. Indeed, it is true that we can know a person when they show us their friends. For example, my cousin was sent to prison because of his involvement in theft. After he came out from jail, he went ahead to commit murder because of his association with a close friend in prison who was on Deathrow. However, it is clear that a criminal can still commit crime after being released from prison because of keeping the wrong association.
To continue, Ex-convicts will not go back to crime, and they will desire to live a better life if they are given proper orientation on good values. To illustrate, it was seen on the news that inmates at 'Afara Correctional Centre' are receiving lectures on good values, and the attitudes of their Ex-convicts can show for it. Thus, orientation on good values will impact prisoners positively, and it will solve the problem of Ex-convicts commiting crime when they leave prison.
To conclude, In this essay I have discussed how the wrong association will make a criminal commit more crimes after being released from prison, and how orientation of good values will help to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus, for example, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55647281291 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487455197133 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3438288572 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223908892364 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103166000315 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905904470836 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15995174468 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527501919989 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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