There are people who believe that the only thing to consider when buying something should be the price. I do not seem to agree with this opinion because there are definitely other things that need consideration, while, wanting to purchase anything.
First, it is a good idea to check for the quality of what you want to buy and not only considering the price alone. The quality check would ensure that the product bought is durable or serve as a guide to know how long it would last. For instance, when a company wants to buy chairs to keep for their clients in the waiting room, the quality of the seats are a very important factor to look out for. Similarly, it is expedient to know if we really need what we want to buy. For example, people who have projects to conclude would hear about a new trending car and would end up ordering that car out of excitement.
Secondly, only the consideration of the price of something whenever it is about to be purchased is not a positive action. In our world today, countries spend a lot of money buying nuclear weapons whose destruction rates are so powerful. Truly, the first thing to think about before buying nuclear warheads should be the negative impact it would bring to the society at large and not the cost. How would a person with conscience think about only the price in the situation above?
In conclusion, saying that prices of things should be the only consideration before purchase, after positive facts have been brought to your notice is not a good development.
- Throughout the history people dream to build a perfect society while they haven t agreed how the ideal society would be like What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society How do people do to achieve an ideal society 61
- You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick Write to another classmate and invite him her to the p 73
- some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centres while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution discuss both sides and give your opinion I need to score 7 73
- Some people say that government should give priority to health care whereas others say they should spend on other important priorities Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Water is a natural resource that should always be free Governments should ban the sale of bottled water To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64206642066 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49513080918 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6436005835 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232690111066 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904719570939 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780257962119 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155407889775 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900509208889 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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