Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to apologize formally for missing the Annual Company Investor meeting. I was constrained by the circumstances to miss the meeting. Allow me to elaborate.
First, I have been associated with the company and have never missed out any meetings that I have been asked to attend. Moreover, there are some meetings that I have attended which I thought could use my perspective on things, even though I was not invited. I feel sorry for missing out on that and I know how much important it was to attend the meeting.
You see, I was on my way to attend the meeting, but midway I felt excruciating pain my lower abdomen area and asked the driver to take me to hospital. The doctors had ordered immediate Appendix surgery and I was not able to inform anyone but my wife. Even she was not able to make it to the hospital. The last thing I remember was my wife shrieking. I am doing fine post-surgery, but the doctor has recommended me one-week bed rest.
At last, I would again like to apologize and I am willing to compensate for my non-attendance at the meeting by taking everyone out on dinner when I resume work again.
I hope you will understand my troubles and empathize with me.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d empathize with me. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60888888889 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72783186188 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6178324326 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0714285714 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195825884963 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646571482995 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069367983292 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125695936761 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705294366337 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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