Dear Sir/Madam,
I am regular customer of yours and I am writing to formally complaint about the minor accident that I happened to meet with recently at your establishment. This event not only hurt me physically, but it was emotionally detrimental as well.
I am a retired bank manager living in B-10 South Avenue which is in the periphery of the down town, where your shop is present. I have been living here from past twenty years and thus, your shop is a paramount place for me and my family to buy all house hold required items.
Although, up till now my experience with your association has been great. It has always been pleasing to do shopping from there as the milieu of it is quite snug. However, two days ago, I visited there to buy some condiments and while going for billing a big carton filled with foodstuffs fell on me. As, it directly hit my head, I suffered from neck injury. In addition, to extreme pain, I was mentally traumatized too. In deed, I believe that I was very fortunate that i got saved as it didn't cause any severe injury, but it could have lead to some major accident which would have costs me even my life.
Though, I did not officially file a case against your departmental store, but I would like to bring your attention towards this miss happening so that you find out the cause of it and make sure that it is not repeated in future. In order, to do so, you must do a detailed investigation and inquire about that particular staff member, who is the actual culprit of this accident. Furthermore, I want you take an strict action against that staff member.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...sociation has been great. It has always been pleasing to do shopping from there as the milieu...
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Line 7, column 472, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... believe that I was very fortunate that i got saved as it didnt cause any severe ...
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Line 7, column 490, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s very fortunate that i got saved as it didnt cause any severe injury, but it could h...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t and make sure that it is not repeated in future. In order, to do so, you must do a deta...
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Line 9, column 408, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... accident. Furthermore, I want you take an strict action against that staff member...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55445544554 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55465158166 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.762037392 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137509978551 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427125872413 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402165794907 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785397964374 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475532289092 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.