you were hurt in a minor accident inside the a super market, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
write a letter to manger of the super market. In your letter
1. say who you are
2. give details about the accident
3. suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
Dated: 29 July, 2017
Respected Sir,
Subject line: Super market accident and request for implementation of preventive measures
Greetings Sir, I hope the state missive finds you in the very best. My name Is Aatif Imtiaz and I am a banker by profession. Presently, I am working as Branch Manager in MCB Bank Limited, F-7 Jinnah Super Market Branch. It’s imperative to impart the notion that this letter entails the details of my accident in Jinnah Super Market. The reasons of the aforestated accident are highlighted here under.
To begin with, it is being observed in the market that visitors usually bring their vehicles in the middle of the market for spot purchases instead of placing them in parking. Ultimately, this creates a lot of rush and anarchy within the market. On last Saturday, while leaving the office a car struck me on my legs left me in serious pain. Moreover, the management of the market could not be seen anywhere in controlling such a huge rush and to avoid such minor accidents. Furthermore, I would like state a request that there should be strict orders from market management for visitors to park their vehicles in parking area and nobody shall be allowed to take his/her vehicle within the market.
In summation, I shall be grateful on my part if the suggestion supra can kindly be accommodated so that such incidents can be avoided. Hope to hearing from you real soon. Many thanks for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Aatif Imtiaz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2017'.
Suggestion: July 2017
Dated: 29 July, 2017 Respected Sir, Subject line: Super ma...
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Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ks for your time. Yours sincerely, Aatif Imtiaz
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61350645685 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1408211396 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2142857143 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198023441618 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064441919799 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494070164797 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097318082593 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615197767659 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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