Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the missing luggage department in your company which they promised to find my suitcases on the same day when I reported my bags lost, but they return the suitcases to me two days later that causing me a lot of trouble.
I was invited to attend the workshop and a seminar on 18 August 2022, and I reserved a flight from Hong Kong to Japan on 17 August 2022 from the Flash Airline website. I received a message about the flight being cancelled due to the flight engine being out of order after I checked in my luggage, so Flash Airline arranged another flight for me. However, I found my luggage lost when I reached Narita International Airport.
I report the missing luggage to the missing luggage department at the Airport, and your staff promised me that they can find my suitcases before 18 August but even so, they return my suitcases on 19 August. The business documents and proposal inside the suitcase are indispensable for my workshop and a seminar and I need to postpone the workshop schedule due to the late suitcases return.
Therefore, I would like to request your company compensate the postpone fee of the hotel and investigate this matter so that I would once again be confident to use your company service.
Yours faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st 2022 from the Flash Airline website. I received a message about the flight bei...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...like to request your company compensate the postpone fee of the hotel and investigate this m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75107296137 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66203770969 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549356223176 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2680954381 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.375 76.5299724578 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 16.8248392259 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194945150026 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904847680425 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032550065181 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109353720427 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500016711053 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.