Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to explain my concern about my current roommate who is making my stay in the college hostel difficult. I am having unavoidable and unmanageable problems due to her activities and those are impacting my study badly.
I am a first-year student in your college and share a room with another student. My present roommate has frequent parties in which she plays loud music in the wee hour. She is two years senior to me, and I cannot protest her irrational behaviours due to which my study is being hampered. In addition, her friends who visited to her parities, taking my things without my permission. It’s just the act of the thief.
In these circumstances, not only I cannot concentrate on my studies, but also worried about my personal safety. Therefore, I would like to request a single room where I will be free from such distractions.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing a letter to explain my conc...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... those are impacting my study badly. I am a first-year student in your college...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82634730539 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80736802252 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670658682635 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.944631434 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2727272727 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190793142941 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742155014968 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770735257314 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998139397534 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625307554765 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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