You were invited to your best friend’s wedding.
However, you experienced an emergency and were not able to attend.
Write a letter to your best friend. In your letter:
• Apologize for not attending
• Describe what the issue was.
• Describe how you compensate for it
Dear Jane,
I hope you and your family are doing great. Last sunday, I recieved your's wedding invitation card. First of all, many congratulations to you. I am quite thrilled and excited to hear this news, finally you are getting married.
I am very sorry for not attending your's wedding because of my final examinations. Your marriage date is in between my exams, therefore, it is very difficult for me to come. Moreover, I have to prepare the presentation for the thesis work, as you know this is extremely important, and without this teacher will not send my assessment. These days, University is taking the strict action against those students who are not submitting their assignments on time. Consequently, I am worried and tensed for these situations.
I feel regret that my presence will be missing on your wedding day. I wish, I could come. I hope you understand my situation. Meanwhile, I am sending you a surprise gift for your special day, may be you like it. Once again, congratulation for this special and precious day from me and my family.
I am looking forward for your prompt reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Emily Shore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...your wedding day. I wish, I could come. I hope you understand my situation. Meanw...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...u a surprise gift for your special day, may be you like it. Once again, congratulation...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, i feel, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91237113402 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84039328065 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644329896907 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7166544147 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5625 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.125 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279312500276 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984545148583 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591043576509 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178687454569 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300487894026 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.