You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer, in your letter
Tell them why you need to move the interview time
Ask to change the interview date
Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask if you are so generous as to reschedule my interview which was supposed to be on the 15th of September. I was ready for the interview but I noticed that my best friend’s wedding party is going to be held on the same date. Since I was requested to speak at the ceremony, I thought, maybe, you could transfer my interview to another date.
I can understand that this request may cause you inconvenience in terms of changing the Human Resource schedule, but I really appreciate it if you could change the interview date. I will be available from the 17th of September and at any time that is convenient for the recruiter team.
No need to mention, I am really interested in this position since I am certain that I can excel in my career due to the available space for promotion in your esteemed company.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Yalda Asgari.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61818181818 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75154185009 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1846181839 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292891298473 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121447935243 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781939149971 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159582671722 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809842250926 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.