You will go to London soon to stay there for one year Write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation In your letter you should say why you are going to London what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive

Dear sir,

I am writing you to acquire information regarding accommodation in London city. As I am going to reside at Queen's street, I want complete guidance from your side. Let me describe further.

I am working as IT professional in C.G company pvt ltd situated in India. Fortunately, my company has gave me the opportunity to work in base camp of company. This factory is situated near by Queen's street in London. It will be effortless for me to rent an apartment nearby my working place. Also, it will save my time to commute.

Certainly, I need a fully furnished apartment with all basic amenities such as geyser, room heater, and refrigerator. I would prefer balcony attached with bedroom. Additionally, it is prominent for me to live in peaceful environment after the hectic schedule.

As per the plan, I will reach there on 17th October and will stay at company's accommodation for 2 days. I will need the said facilitated apartment from 20 October.

I hope you will get back to me with some quotations.

Yours sincerely,
Vedika

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89944134078 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96269577298 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7541588475 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.4666666667 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234362865689 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671994147501 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807271008666 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133230615825 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843446532198 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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