You wish to enroll in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but have received no reply.
Write a letter to the college. In your letter
Express your concern because the course will start in less than two months.
Find out if you can still enroll
Ask for further information about the course, including the cost
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding to my enrolment and about the information of college. I have sent a letter to the college regarding about course duration and fees. Unfortunately, still I have not got any relay from your college.
In addition, I chose your college due to the course you offered did not find other colleges at Australia. I think the course will start with in next 2 months. But still i did not receive any news from your admission office. Basically, I require to know about course fees and last date of enrolment. If I get those information, can start my visa application process as soon as possible. As earlier mentioned that, I am an international student from Bangladesh. So I have to start applying student visa before a month.
Please let me know if you have available seats for international student. I hope to hear your response soon
Yours faithfully
najam uddin
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-10-25 | nijam | 67 | view |
| 2019-07-07 | Primace | 56 | view |
| 2018-07-02 | tkaur1988@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2018-06-24 | kirtis | 73 | view |
| 2017-11-24 | deepshikha_sh01 | 56 | view |
- Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well What problems will your country face in the next ten years How can these problems be overcome Give reasons for your 73
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Although you have never formally studied computing you have always been interested in computers You have just read about a computer course that really interests you but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course Write a letter to the co 73
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
- In some cultures children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u offered did not find other colleges at Australia. I think the course will start...
^^^^
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... start with in next 2 months. But still i did not receive any news from your admi...
^
Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
... admission office. Basically, I require to know about course fees and last date of enro...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...es and last date of enrolment. If I get those information, can start my visa application process ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossible. As earlier mentioned that, I am an international student from Bangladesh...
^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear your response soon Yours faithfully najam uddin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, still, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79245283019 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82163627432 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635220125786 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.1777876599 44.8134815571 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.5 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382332273311 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117762692009 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871554122229 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231146990298 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679030293275 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.