you work for a company. you have seen information online about a training course that would be useful for your work.
writing a letter to your manager. In your letter
- give details of the course
- say how the course would be useful
- explain how company could help you do this course
Dear Michel,
I have recently become aware about the online course called Six Sigma Green Belt offered by the KPMG. I am writing to ask you for your support in taking this course. It an eight-days intensive course with two parts. The first part is to acquaint with theory session about the aspects of Six Sigma concept, principle, tools and practical approaches. The second part is about to work on some practical problems come across the real time industries especially mechanical industries and how these six sigma tools could be useful. It starts on Monday 15th March 2021.
I truly believe this course would be beneficial to understand some practical problems occurred in our product and process quality and to focus on root cause analysis. I think six sigma green belt course will help me professionally in my capacity as Mechanical Engineer and make a real difference in the quality of product and processes.
For these reasons, I am requesting paid leave from 15th to 23rd march to attend this course and it would be helpful if another team member did not take leave at the same time. I hope this time will not be busy at work still if you need me just send a mail, I can be available at evenings.
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Best Wishes
Yash Pankaj Mehta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you soon Best Wishes Yash Pankaj Mehta
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72566371681 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45560471533 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5609851876 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256557136459 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847243174074 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518998907753 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132282051908 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055453766884 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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