You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Dear Alex,
How’re you doing? First of all, congratulations on your permanent visa for the UK. I hope you’re settled now. Anyway, I wanted to let you know that I’ve recently joined the aerospace company in Central London, which is Alten, UK.
As you know that previously, I was working as a customer service manager in Ladbrokes. To be honest, this work was a part time job along with my master’s studies. Although the salary was pretty enough, I wanted to leave that job because this was not related to my field. To be honest, I always wanted to work as an aerospace engineer.
Now, I’m working as a thermal engineer for aerodynamic engines. It is the interesting job with completely related to my master’s thesis. I’m right now working on the gas turbine ultra-fan invented by Rolls-Royce, the aero company. I even sometimes have to travel to Europe for the company’s projects.
Well, hold your excitement, because I have also got the permanent visa for the UK, and I am going to buy a new house in Central London near Piccadilly circus area.
Anyway, I’d like to invite you for the dinner next weekend. I hope you will be free at this time. Can’t wait to meet you mate. Give love to kids.
See you soon,
Yash
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...adbrokes. To be honest, this work was a part time job along with my master’s studies. Alt...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, first, so, well, even so, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69724770642 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61887639898 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.191031708 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8888888889 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1111111111 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216772018908 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616663570466 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253601489951 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106116593463 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255002037344 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.