I am writing this letter to inform you about the recent problem with one of the equipment that I use for my work. Since I am a graphic designer and I run my project from my home office so that last month I bought some digital tools for my work from your company, unfortunately, the digital pen that is using to draw painting on my computer does not work very well and it is losing the battery power every 50 minutes when I worked with it.
My work very depends on these digital tools so that this is causing me much trouble. I have to charge the pen every hour and the charging process takes long at least one hour also I have a deadline to deliver my project to a very important client and I do not have enough time to deal with this problem.
I would appreciate it if you send me a new pen and a return back the oldest one and I already have a guarantee for such issues and I need this piece of my equipment to complete my design.
Thanks for your consideration
Sincerely yours
Sogol Hassani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ciate it if you send me a new pen and a return back the oldest one and I already have a gua...
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Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... design. Thanks for your consideration Sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
^^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eration Sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21761658031 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32412155039 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.858530789 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1666666667 16.8248392259 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283814355594 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156866101532 0.0766984524023 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114494750954 0.0603063233224 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159647497161 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491826587692 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.79 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.